Some people believe that government should spend money on building train and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think that building more and wider roads is the better way to reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both the views and give your opinion

It is irrefutable to say that traffic congestion has become a major issue in most of the developing countries. Few individuals
thinks
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think
that
administration
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the administration
should make expenditure on
fabrication
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the fabrication
of trains and construction of new subway lines. While others are in
favor
promote over another
favour
of edification of more and broader roads to reduce the bottlenecking of vehicles.
This
essay will cast light on both the views. I accord to the statement that spending money on building trains and
subways
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subway
lines
willnenhance
the mode of
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
.
For instance
, in
last few years government
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the last few years government
of India has introduced many metro trains which are a convenient and affordable mode of
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
.
This
, in turn, reduced the problem of traffic congestion up to
large extent
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a large extent
.
Other
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Another
proposed solution for the
this
is to lay down
subwaylines
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subway lines
which
is
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are
alsona
(Hinduism) a posture or manner of sitting (as in the practice of yoga)
asana
remarkable solution
forbthisbissue
. These proposed solutions will not only decrease the
traffic but
Accept comma addition
traffic, but
also
reducevthe
pollution on earth.
On the other hand
, some people
suggests
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suggest
the of developing more and broader roads.
This
idea brings large destruction with
itself
the thing named or in question
it
. To illustrate,
innthe process
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the innate process
innate process
of widening the roads large amount of
road side
edge of a way or road or path
roadside
tress
a tall perennial woody plant having a main trunk and branches forming a distinct elevated crown; includes both gymnosperms and angiosperms
trees
will be cut down.
In addition
, there will be
need
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a need
of demolishing the building which
are coming
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is coming
in the path.
This
will lead to environmental loss as well. In conclusion,
government
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the government
should limit the usage of vehicles by implementing some strong policies
such
as odd even rule.
This
rule has been implemented by many countries including India.
Submitted by maninderecediet on

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