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The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Five Major Types of Fast Food Eaten in Melbourne (units) 2005Present2025 Hamburgers403851 Fried Chicken353745 Salads51541 Fried Rice699 Noodles689

The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Five Major Types of Fast Food Eaten in Melbourne (units) 2005Present2025 Hamburgers403851 Fried Chicken353745 Salads51541 Fried Rice699 Noodles689
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The given table describes the information about the five major fast foods that are consumed in Melbourne from the past 2005 to
Correct article usage
the present
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present
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the present
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 and
predictable
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 2025.
Overall
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,what stands out from the graph is that
,
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apply
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 Hamburgers
is
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are
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 the most significant
item
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 eaten by most
of
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apply
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the
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apply
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people and Noodles
is
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are
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 the least significant
item
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.
Firstly
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, Hamburgers
is
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are
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 the major type of fast food eaten in Melbourne with 40
units
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 in the past 2005.
However
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 it
then
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 gradually decreased to 38
units
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 at present before increasing to 51
units
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 in the future (2025). Fried chicken is the
second highest
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second-highest
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 snack
item
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 eaten in Melbourne with 37
units
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 at present and 45
units
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 after 6 years.
Secondly
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,
salad's
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salad
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is
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was
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 the least significant
item
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 eaten in the past with 5
units
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 and it
rosed
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rose
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 significantly to 41
units
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 after 2 decades.
Moreover
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, fried rice and Noodles are
second
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the second
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 least items eaten with 6
units
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 in the past and 9
units
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 after 20 years.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words item, units with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 4 times.
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