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Tarnagul is a small town near Melbourne. The maps show the town's development over a period of time.

Tarnagul is a small town near Melbourne. The maps show the town's development over a period of time.
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The maps depict the changes in Melbourne’s small
town
 named Tarnagul over one century. In 1900, the
town
 was not much developed. It has one orange and
mandarins
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mandarin
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 farm and
also
 one diary. There was
a
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apply
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very little
town
 area in the
center
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centre
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 of
farmland
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the farmland
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. After 50 years, the
town
 was quite progressed and focused on farming. There are orange farming
in
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on
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 the north and east
side
.
As well as
 lemon and grapefruit
produced
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are produced
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in
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on
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 the west
side
. There is
also
Railway
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a Railway
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 track and some parking
shed
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sheds
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in
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on
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 the south
side
 of
town
. But the
town
 area had
been
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expanded
more
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by more
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 than 20%. In the 21st century, the whole look of
this
town
 has
been
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changed. It had
wildlife
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a wildlife
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 sanctuary
in
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on
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 the west
side
. Both farmlands were empty and own
town
 area was
also
 shrunk. But there were many developments
in
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on
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 the south
side
. It has a park
along with
tourist
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a tourist
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 shop and on the other
side
 of
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the road
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road
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,road
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 parking shed
are
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is
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 converted into a local museum and craft market. The track has been removed. Road and river stay
same
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the same
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over
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for over
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 100 years.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, side with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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