A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The relationship between human and animals are controversial and has a long and old historical background.
Its
Suggestion
It's
understandable that animals have been used as a form of feeding our
especie
Suggestion
especially
especial
specie
taking in consideration that in the
past there
Accept comma addition
past, there
were not the same
quantatie
how much there is or how many there are of something that you can quantify
quantity
of recourses as today. Currently,
its
it is
it's
possible to see the rise of the vegan and vegetarian
moviment
a change of position that does not entail a change of location
movement
, taking place
overwild
Suggestion
over wild
. The culture
is been changing
Suggestion
is changing
along with the evolution of the food and human
concious
intentionally conceived
conscious
concourse
. Eating
meet
the flesh of animals (including fishes and birds and snails) used as food
meat
is a natural process in our society, and for
centurys
a period of 100 years
centuries
it has been considerate a normal practice.
Also
, animals are
normaly
under normal conditions
normally
used as part of our clothings and in experimental process related to
medical industry
Suggestion
the medical industry
and research. Through theses tests, the human could
descovered
Suggestion
discover
discovered
many treatments and solutions to several diseases. The
vegeterain
eater of fruits and grains and nuts; someone who eats no meat or fish or (often) any animal products
vegetarian
movement
are increasing
Suggestion
is increasing
in theses lasts years and decades, as a process of human evolution and life-
sytle
how something is done or how it happens
style
. Nowadays is possible to eat
healthly
Suggestion
healthy
healthily
with a lot of
diferents
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
food options, not including
meet
the flesh of animals (including fishes and birds and snails) used as food
meat
. In
adiction
a component that is added to something to improve it
addition
addiction
education
, there are many ways to replace the proteins that only animal
meet
the flesh of animals (including fishes and birds and snails) used as food
meat
can provide.
Its
Suggestion
It's
easy to read on internet about
recepies
directions for making something
recipes
and where to find the
rigth
an abstract idea of that which is due to a person or governmental body by law or tradition or nature
right
products, and to get in touch with
vegetarians
Suggestion
vegetarian
groups of people that have the same life
philosoph
a belief (or system of beliefs) accepted as authoritative by some group or school
philosophy
. The vegan age is
associate
Suggestion
associated
with the
beliaf
any cognitive content held as true
belief
beliefs
believe
that animals need to be
protect
Suggestion
protected
from human, since there are not need to kill them with the huge proportion of vegetables and fruits able and the change of resources able. On my point of view, there are not right or wrong, just two
diferents
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
ways to live life. I am not
caple
(usually followed by 'of') having capacity or ability
capable
to give a personal opinion and defend some side about something
that is
so personal and is related with someones
councious
intentionally conceived
conscious
. I
trualy
in accordance with truth or fact or reality
truly
beliave
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believes
believed
that
everbody
all people
everybody
should
fell
undergo an emotional sensation or be in a particular state of mind
feel
fre
able to act at will; not hampered; not under compulsion or restraint
free
to practice what they
fell
mat together and make felt-like
felt
confortable
providing or experiencing physical well-being or relief
comfortable
and happy. I may say that
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
have a true desire to
became
Suggestion
become
vegetarian as a form to help save the environment and the
animals
Suggestion
animal
life.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Exploitation
  • Animal welfare
  • Ethical treatment
  • Vegetarianism
  • Veganism
  • Cognitive dissonance
  • Humane
  • Live stock
  • Cruelty-free
  • Bioethics
  • Conservation
  • Habitat preservation
  • Ecosystem
  • Biodiversity
  • Animal testing
  • Synthetic biology
  • Genetic engineering
  • Speciesism
  • Animal husbandry
  • Sustainable farming
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