A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#people #animals #rights #humans #food #research

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

The relationship between human and animals are controversial and has a long and old historical background.

Its

Suggestion

It's

understandable that animals have been used as a form of feeding our

especie

Suggestion

especially

especial

specie

taking in consideration that in the

past there

Accept comma addition

past, there

were not the same

quantatie

how much there is or how many there are of something that you can quantify

quantity

of recourses as today. Currently,

its

it is

it's

possible to see the rise of the vegan and vegetarian

moviment

a change of position that does not entail a change of location

movement

, taking place

overwild

Suggestion

over wild

. The culture

is been changing

Suggestion

is changing

along with the evolution of the food and human

concious

intentionally conceived

conscious

concourse

. Eating

meet

the flesh of animals (including fishes and birds and snails) used as food

meat

is a natural process in our society, and for

centurys

a period of 100 years

centuries

it has been considerate a normal practice.

Also

Linking Words

, animals are

normaly

under normal conditions

normally

used as part of our clothings and in experimental process related to

medical industry

Suggestion

the medical industry

and research. Through theses tests, the human could

descovered

Suggestion

discover

discovered

many treatments and solutions to several diseases. The

vegeterain

eater of fruits and grains and nuts; someone who eats no meat or fish or (often) any animal products

vegetarian

movement

are increasing

Suggestion

is increasing

in theses lasts years and decades, as a process of human evolution and life-

sytle

how something is done or how it happens

style

. Nowadays is possible to eat

healthly

Suggestion

healthy

healthily

with a lot of

diferents

unlike in nature or quality or form or degree

different

food options, not including

meet

the flesh of animals (including fishes and birds and snails) used as food

meat

. In

adiction

a component that is added to something to improve it

addition

addiction

education

, there are many ways to replace the proteins that only animal

meet

the flesh of animals (including fishes and birds and snails) used as food

meat

can provide.

Its

Suggestion

It's

easy to read on internet about

recepies

directions for making something

recipes

and where to find the

rigth

an abstract idea of that which is due to a person or governmental body by law or tradition or nature

right

products, and to get in touch with

vegetarians

Suggestion

vegetarian

groups of people that have the same life

philosoph

a belief (or system of beliefs) accepted as authoritative by some group or school

philosophy

. The vegan age is

associate

Suggestion

associated

with the

beliaf

any cognitive content held as true

belief

beliefs

believe

that animals need to be

protect

Suggestion

protected

from human, since there are not need to kill them with the huge proportion of vegetables and fruits able and the change of resources able. On my point of view, there are not right or wrong, just two

diferents

unlike in nature or quality or form or degree

different

ways to live life. I am not

caple

(usually followed by 'of') having capacity or ability

capable

to give a personal opinion and defend some side about something

that is

Linking Words

so personal and is related with someones

councious

intentionally conceived

conscious

. I

trualy

in accordance with truth or fact or reality

truly

beliave

accept as true; take to be true

believe

believes

believed

that

everbody

all people

everybody

should

fell

undergo an emotional sensation or be in a particular state of mind

feel

fre

able to act at will; not hampered; not under compulsion or restraint

free

to practice what they

fell

mat together and make felt-like

felt

confortable

providing or experiencing physical well-being or relief

comfortable

and happy. I may say that

refers to the speaker or writer

have a true desire to

became

Suggestion

become

vegetarian as a form to help save the environment and the

animals

Suggestion

animal

life.

Wed Aug 07 2019

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

Paragraph 1 - Introduction

Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

2
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
43
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

335 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

Topic Vocabulary:

Exploitation
Animal welfare
Ethical treatment
Vegetarianism
Veganism
Cognitive dissonance
Humane
Live stock
Cruelty-free
Bioethics
Conservation
Habitat preservation
Ecosystem
Biodiversity
Animal testing
Synthetic biology
Genetic engineering
Speciesism
Animal husbandry
Sustainable farming

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

7.5
band
Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their countries. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to change this negative attitude towards international tourism?
Without a shadow of a doubt, tourism on a global scale has been flourishing in many countries. However, many people assert that this has detrimental impacts on their nation. This essay will analyze some of the main reasons and then suggest feasible solutions to this issue.
7
band
Some people say that what individuals do to protect the environment cannot make difference, others say that individuals can protect the environment. Discuss both of these views and give your opinion.
Whether or not individuals can do anything to ensure the environment stays safe is a controversial discussion point. While some people say that if everyone takes action, drastic changes will take place, opponents such as this writer believe that what an individual does has little effect on the environment and only the government is able to help improve the situation.
<4
band
Write about the following topic: Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
To reduce the gap of wealthy and poor countries, developed countries help the poor ones by sending money. However, this is only scratching the surface of the problem without solving it. In my opinion, wealthy countries should not provide money but other kinds of help to those countries which are not well-developed yet. The reasons will be listed in the paragraphs below.
5
band
The two below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day.
The maps illustrate the developments in Lynwich College from 2006 to the present day.
6
band
In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport.
In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. This essay covers why they put forward this idea and what both views entail.

A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their countries. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to change this negative attitude towards international tourism?

Some people say that what individuals do to protect the environment cannot make difference, others say that individuals can protect the environment. Discuss both of these views and give your opinion.

The two below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day.

In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport.