Modern lifestyles mean that many parents have little time for their children. Many children suffer because they do not get as much attention from their parents as children in the past. Do you agree or disagree

A common concern nowadays is how modern lifestyles can have a negative effect on family

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. A particular worry is that parents no longer are able to provide sufficient care and support to their children. My own view is that

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but not always so. On the one hand, busy parent`s lifestyles have some adverse effects on children`s upbringing. While traditionally the husband was the breadwinner of the family and the wife stayed at home to take care of her children,

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ordinary family role now has completely changed. Nowadays, women go outside to work side by side with men, leaving her children alone or with nannies. As

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parents spend less time with their children,

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working parents tend to have less opportunity to supervise and watch their children`s behaviour

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many hard working families may still find the time to spend with their children. These families put more value on raising children

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in some low income families, parents are still considerably involved in their children`s

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so they know their children`s friends. From my own experience

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grew up in

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where both parents are

full time worker

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full time workers

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but

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barely remember a day where

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one of my parents

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the busy lifestyle has resulted in a situation where families are less close than before

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believe that there are cases where parents extremely busy but still managed to be involved in their children`s

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. It should be the parent duty to balance their working and family

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life particularly

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life, particularly

if they decided to have children