An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, it is clearly obvious that the number of skilled workers, living in poor countries,
immigrating
from their homeland to much more prosperous countries is increasing day after day. And, as a consequence, there are a lot of problems associated with that phenomenon.
leave one's country of residence for a new one
emigrating
To begin
with, people are leaving their country of origin in searching for a better lifestyle. To illustrate, professional workers will get much more luxurious services like education, health care, public transportation…
Accept space
…
etc
. continuing in the same way
etc.
in
their new destinations compared with those offered in their hometowns. And Suggestion
In
as a result
, these poor countries have to pay more attention to delivered public services in order to keep their valuable human resources as much as possible.
Another essential motivator for the people to immigrate is money. In other words
, a high standard of salaries is paramount factor any professional is searching for. To clarify, unless the professionals get paid fairly, they will not think of attempting new horizons. In addition
to that, the immigrants will find it much more easier
to develop their careers if compared with their homelands. Suggestion
easier
For example
, doctors, in developed counties, will find more facilities and technologies to deal with and, as a result
, they will be capable of reaching more achievements with their professions. So, poor countries have a lot to do with their salaries
standards.
In conclusion, human resources are the core for any nation. And it is obligatory for it to pay all the efforts to keep them satisfied and willing to stay in their hometowns. Suggestion
salary
Otherwise
, reducing the numbers of immigrants could be insurmountable.Submitted by mohgalaleldin on
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