Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Which opinion do you agree with? Discuss both options and give examples.

In recent years, researchers have studied how pets can help individual live a healthy life. People's believe that pets being dangerous and unhealthy are either the result of an incident or, a story that influenced them. In

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essay I will discuss both opinion and present relevant examples. Indeed, in my mind, I have enough evidence from the research done on the benefits of pets at

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to agree with the

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opinion.

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with, a

child

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has a tendency to seek attention from a living being around them. Having a

pet

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at

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keeps them

engaging

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engaged

and active at all times, in turn helps in their

better

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best

mental growth

.

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In a study conducted by a British

doctors

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doctor

shows that a

child

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that grows with a

pet

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at

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develop loving and caring as an attribute compared to one who

is growing alone

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is alone growing

. The reason

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for

of

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character development is they see the love and care the

pet

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has for them and they try to pay back the same.

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mental and emotional character

developement

act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining

development

will make them a better

peoson

a human being

person

in life and

centrainly

definitely or positively ('sure' is sometimes used informally for 'surely')

certainly

proves that, having a

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at

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is good. There are

plethora

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a plethora

of animal species that

exisits

have an existence, be extant

exists

exist

around the world, but not all the animals and their species can be

tammed

brought from wildness into a domesticated state

tamed

themed

tuned

and kept at

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, animals like snake, lion, scorpion are

dangered

marked by extreme anger

angered

species and are not suggested to be

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petted

. The reason these animals are entitled as wild animals is due to their

agressive

having or showing determination and energetic pursuit of your ends

aggressive

nature in comparison to the domestic animals. Domestic animals have a sense of

loyality

the quality of being loyal

loyalty

, love and care towards its owners

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wild animal can

harm

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the owner in case they sense the feeling of

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.

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A recent incident that happened

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at

the zoo, where the

zookeeper

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Zookeeper

skipper

of the lions who have

pet

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them for the

last

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4 years were attached by the lion cubs. Upon investigation by the wildlife protection team it was found out that the

cubs though

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cubs, though

that the

zookeeper

a student who fails to attend classes

skipper

was trying to

harm

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them using the stick in his hand and in

defece

(military) military action or resources protecting a country against potential enemies

defence

they attacked him. In conclusion, I strongly believe that pets are good for children and should be part of their

lifes

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life

lives

as they grow.

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, the parents

neds

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need

needs

to

careful

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carefully

deciding

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decide

the type of

pet

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they want to leave their

child

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with. Animals with

agressive

having or showing determination and energetic pursuit of your ends

aggressive

nature may

harm

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the

child

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.