The line graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992

The line graph illustrates the
number
of audiences
(
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(
over 4 years old) enjoying audio and television in
day
from October -
december
the last (12th) month of the year
December
1992. Time
are measured
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is measured
in with 2 hour interval and population are measured in percentage. Overall, the
number
of
TV
audiences
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audience
were
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was
more than the Radio audiences. The days
starts
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start
with the equal
number
of
TV
and Radio
audiences but
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audiences, but
after the time passes the
number
of audio audiences increased
significantly whereas
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significantly, whereas
as the time passes the
amount
of
TV
audiences increased rapidly and at the end of the
day
its decreases sharply. With regards to the
amount
of
TV
audiences at 1.00
clock
it was 5% - 10% of population watching
TV
and within
half hour
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a half hour
its decreases. At 5.00
clock
the
number
TV
audiences
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audience
increases slightly and gradually falls to
under
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below
5% at 11:30. From 11:30 the
number
of
TV
watchers rose to 15% at 11:30 and from that as the passed the
amount
of
TV
audiences
rose
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had risen
gradually to just under 45
%
at 21.00
clock
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clocks
and decreases steeply to just over 10% at the end of the
day
.
On the other hand
, at the beginning of the
day
the
number
of audio audiences is under 5% and remain almost unchanged at 6:00
clock
. From 7:00
clock
the
amount
of audio audiences rose sharply to 25% and decreases gradually as the passes. At 15.00
clock
there was an increased in audio audiences for 3 hours and it decreases again slightly and ends up as like as the beginning of the
day
at just under 5%.
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