The best way for governments to solve the problem of traffic congestion is providing free public transport in 24 hours per day, and seven days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Recently,
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jams have been increasingly
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popular
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in major cities which cause negatively impact for a commuter. In order to tackle
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issue, some people argue that government should provide free transit all the day.
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supply free public
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would deal with
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jams, I am of the opinion that
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issue action would do more harm than good. On the one hand, providing free transportation all day long is not necessary and leaves a burden on national budgets. According to the majority report,
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jams mainly occur
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all the time.
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, in the long term,
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measure may be unachievable due to its tremendous cost, and it not only
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unable to address the root of the issue. It will be far more economical if
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amount of money is invested in enhancing road facilities.
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, there are many other solutions that have proven more effective in mitigating. Notable among them is the construction and improvement of
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systems
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as roads or railway systems.
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action will help commuters who live far from workplace save their time to drive.
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, governments should implement policies that encourage companies to move to rural areas
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of concentrating on urban areas.
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can reduce
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flow and promise equal development between different regions in a country. In conclusion, while
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all day long may seem like a good idea, I believe that the negative effects of
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action would be far greater than any of its possible advantages
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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