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In many parts of the world, families were larger in the past because people had more children. Do you think there were more advantages or disadvantages to being part of a large family in the past?

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In the past, there were several people to live with many members in home, so they had lots of children and big families. They felt comfortable even had to share everything with the members and took more advantages than possessed in a small family. The greatest challenge for parents who had a lot of children was money. They tried hard to earn big incomes, so they could
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
 daily necessities of all the relatives. After their children in school ages, they had to spend more dollars to send them to qualified schools as education would very important for young generations in the future. Parents
also
 needed money to build their houses larger to accommodate relatives, extended the rooms for them, and bought some stuffs.
Moreover
, parents had to pay more attention which was shared
to
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with
 their children. They might be difficult to managing their tasks of
works
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the works
 and
listening
(law) a proceeding (usually by a court) where evidence is taken for the purpose of determining an issue of fact and reaching a decision based on that evidence
hearing
 stories of their children.
However
, I argue having bigger families give more benefits for people.
Firstly
, Children would learn about responsibilities when there were some activities
in
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at
 home because members could divide it.
This
 character would bring them to be more mature. Owning large families
also
 upgraded intelligence of individuals.
For example
, when they discussed some issues, they would give knowledge or views one and another.
Finally
, when children had grown up, parents would not feel lonely because the members would be more and bigger.
Furthermore
, the children could collaborate to work together. To sum up, big family would give
some problems money
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some money problems
 and attention
in particular
.
On the other hand
, I believe the advantages outweighed the drawback because it created stronger relationship, supported and helped each other when they got the problems..

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