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Technology is becoming increasingly prevalent in the modern world. Given time, technology will completely replace the teacher in the classroom. Analyse both sides of this argument.

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In the
last
 few decades, technology has become integral part of our life. It has reached to classrooms. Many opine that, technology will replace methodological learning in foresees future, but I strongly believed that manual study should be continued.
Firstly
,
a
Suggestion
an
 online study enables distance learning for overseas students.
However
, it not only provide incomplete knowledge, but
also
 leave students with confusion. Since, it will be a pupil convenience programme, there will be a lack of concentration along with reduction in sincerity towards the study.
Secondly
, there are many online videos and application are being used by parents and students for easy and fast learning.
Nonetheless
, they will never be able to take place of the teacher,
besides
 inadequate understanding will be gained by the students. As per survey undertaken by WHO, wire based education has been leaving 69% of the personnel with
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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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