As countries have developed there has been a trend towards smaller family sizes. Why does this happen? How does this affect society?

In early
era there
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era, there
was a
belive
any cognitive content held as true
belief
that family that stays
together grows
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together, grows
together
,
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,
IN today’s modern trend people believe in
nucelar family
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the nuclear family
nuclear family
as the cost of living is compelled to shrink. Nuclear family is
benefical
promoting or enhancing well-being
beneficial
for economic purpose where it believes less no of children helps in better parental attention and is able to give good educational opportunities and
also
lowers the level
os
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OS
os'
stress. Due to having only a
child
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child's
parents
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parent
become
over protective
overly protective
overprotective
and imposes restrictions on the
child which
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child, which
makes it difficult for the
child
to socialize with people and explore the outer world
,
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,
which could be a reason to develop
unexpectable
behaviour like being
stuborn
tenaciously unwilling or marked by tenacious unwillingness to yield
stubborn
, undisciplined, over pampered and attention seekers
,
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,
the psychological
cobdition
a state at a particular time
condition
of the
child
is affected and the importance of family and family values are not known to the
child
.
Therefore living
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Therefore, living
in a small family can be more
benefical
promoting or enhancing well-being
beneficial
for economic
purpose regarless
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purpose, regardless
purpose regardless
this
trend is likely to continue as countries around
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the
world develops and become wealthier.

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