The government is spending a lot of money to discover life in other planets some people think that government is wasting money and should spend more money Addressing problems of public To what extent you agree or disagree?

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Government nowadays are becoming more interested to investigate what is happening in other planets rather than

helping

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helps

public to overcome their everyday problems. Some people think it is of no use investing

money

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in other planets

instead

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of that government can spend

money

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on solving

public’s

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public

issues and I completely agree

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with

this

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point. People

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this

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planet are more stressed because of their daily messes in life,

for example

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, traffics on

road

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the road

. Due to

this

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reason they are not able to reach their office on

time

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which causes them stress. In

this

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case

government

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the government

can spend

money

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on new transportation facilities by building metro rails or express trains.

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, people can always reach their offices on

time

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and they will be before

time

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for their work.

Likewise

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Government

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the Government

who

invest

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invests

money

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on other planets to search for more information is of no use.

For instance

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Accept space

there are only few people who live

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other planets.

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they are scientists who are always in search to discover new things it is not worth to spend huge amount of

money

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in them.

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the other

hand investing

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hand, investing

large amount

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a large amount

large amounts

money

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is absolutely

waste

serving no useful purpose; having no excuse for being

wasted

vast

. That

money

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can be spent on public by providing free education to poor children and supplying water facilities in

villages

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the villages

. To conclude the essay, I totally agree to

this

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point that,

government

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the government

is wasting their

time

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and

money

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by giving it to other planets.

Rather they

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Rather, they

can provide

money

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to the rural areas so that they can live a stress-free life.

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

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Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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The government is spending a lot of money to discover life in other planets some people think that government is wasting money and should spend more money Addressing problems of public To what extent you agree or disagree?

Your opinion

In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people buy local food?

Some people say that the main environmental problem of our times is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

some people say technology have made people social while other disagree discuiss both views and give your opinion'