The government is spending a lot of money to discover life in other planets some people think that government is wasting money and should spend more money Addressing problems of public To what extent you agree or disagree?

Government nowadays are becoming more interested to investigate what is happening in other planets rather than
helping
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helps
public to overcome their everyday problems. Some people think it is of no use investing
money
in other planets
instead
of that government can spend
money
on solving
public’s
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public
issues and I completely agree
to
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with
this
point. People
in
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on
this
planet are more stressed because of their daily messes in life,
for example
, traffics on
road
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the road
. Due to
this
reason they are not able to reach their office on
time
which causes them stress. In
this
case
government
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the government
can spend
money
on new transportation facilities by building metro rails or express trains.
As a result
, people can always reach their offices on
time
and they will be before
time
for their work.
Likewise
,
Government
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the Government
who
invest
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invests
money
on other planets to search for more information is of no use.
For instance
,
Accept space
,
there are only few people who live
in
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on
other planets.
Although
they are scientists who are always in search to discover new things it is not worth to spend huge amount of
money
in them.
on
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On
the other
hand investing
Accept comma addition
hand, investing
large amount
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a large amount
large amounts
of
money
is absolutely
waste
serving no useful purpose; having no excuse for being
wasted
vast
. That
money
can be spent on public by providing free education to poor children and supplying water facilities in
villages
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the villages
. To conclude the essay, I totally agree to
this
point that,
government
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the government
is wasting their
time
and
money
by giving it to other planets.
Rather they
Accept comma addition
Rather, they
can provide
money
to the rural areas so that they can live a stress-free life.
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