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Nowadays consumer goods have become the most important part of people’s lives. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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This
 essay is about the consumer good and how it becomes an essential part in our
life
. As well, we will discuss about its pros and cons in detailed.
However
, in the era of 21 centuries, everything related to general
life
 is important for every human being. I am a strong advocate of
this
 approach and the benefits of
this
 we will cover in
this
 topic. In other worlds,
life
 has completely changed since
last
 two decades,
such
 as we got many facilities in technologies like transportation, mobile phones, internet, tablets and many more products in our lives.
Moreover
, it reduces the distance between the families through the electronic devices, as in the old ages, we use to have a landline phone and letter facility to communicate with our loved ones. But now we have multiple media for communication
likewise
 internet is the most popular medium for voice and video calling, despite from
this
, we could use different computer and mobile application for chit chat and text messaging with anyone around the globe.
Hence
, now a day’s we don't depend on anyone in the middle to initiate our calling session for a specific limited time as it was in the past when there were no
further
 technology mediums like internet and mobile calling. Particularly todays
life
 is more luxuriant with many facilities. Apart from the advantages it has
also
 a negative impact on our lives,
for example
, in families while sitting together in group of peoples, they mostly don’t talk to each other, we could observe them’ mostly they are busy in their own mobile and other gadgets
instead
 of talking to each other. In conclusion, I would say that, the consumer goods have its own benefits and some side effects on everyone’s
life
, it just depends on the usage. In uses it has a lot more options to get benefit from it, especially internet’ its now a significant part of everyone's routine.

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • mass production
  • consumerism
  • economic growth
  • environmental degradation
  • natural resources
  • overconsumption
  • waste management
  • landfill
  • social inequality
  • materialism
  • financial strain
  • mental well-being
  • quality of life
  • job creation
  • productivity
  • pollution
  • deforestation
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