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In many countries today, people in cities either live alone or in small family units, rather than in large family groups. Is this a positive or negative trend?

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Introduction Nowadays, in cities, people would like to live singly or in a small family
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 live in a big family. What the advantages and disadvantages. Living in a big family means that your children will grow in the traditions and experience of adult generation. When you live with your parents they can help you with the financial part,
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, you shouldn't pay for rent of the flat and for food.
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, you can save the time for preparing food and cleaning the house, via they take some of homework on there.
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, If you live with your parents, you should act like they suggest. The less duties you have, the less right you have. Living alone let you make your own decision,
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, in weekday planing and in planing vocations. You would be able to spend your free time exactly for your children and husband/wife. Conclusion Compering all plus and minus of living in a small and big family, we can conclude there is more advantages of living in a big family. It held you to save your money and time for more important thing like growing your children.
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