Nowadays many people choose ready made food and refuse to cook at home. Why do you think it happens? What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a choice?

In recent year as seen that with the advancement of technology and

wild growth

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the wild growth

of globalization people are always working. With

this

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tendancy

an attitude of mind especially one that favors one alternative over others

tendency

people are

prefered

made ready or fit or suitable beforehand

prepared

to get

food

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delivered from a restaurant

insted

in place of, or as an alternative to

instead

of spending

time

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to make

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Ordering and getting ready meal from outside home as own

advantage of

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advantage, of

cheap in price comes with cons of

quality

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and higher risk of health.

To begin

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with, there is no doubt that cooking takes

time

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it's

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It's

not only making the

food

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, it's

also

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include

Suggestion

included

the process of cleaning of dishes

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kitchen after preparing

meal

Suggestion

meals

a meal

. That took a

considarble

large or relatively large in number or amount or extent or degree

considerable

considerably

amount of

time

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person

Suggestion

the person

. A

person

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can utilise

this

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time

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for themselves, can spend with their loved ones

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can take rest and can do any other productive activity.As a busy

person

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always working, getting meal from

restaurant

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the restaurant

a restaurant

is like blessing for him.

Moreover

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, often

this

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ready meals are cheaper and

easy

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easily

avaliable

obtainable or accessible and ready for use or service

available

that attracts more people to get them even for the people who are not busy. Another reason

is one

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is, one

can order

food

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and get any

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time even

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time, even

at 4 am in

morning thanks

Suggestion

the morning, thanks

the morning thanks

to 24 hours

food

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service and online

food

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ordering service. As

flip side

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the flip side

coin

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the coin

, ready meal

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also have

Suggestion

also has

there

of them or themselves

their

cons.

First

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and foremost concern is about the

quality

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of the

food

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. Usually,

this

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kind of ready meals contains low

quality

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ingredence

a component of a mixture or compound

ingredients

ingredient

along with lots of

preservative

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preservatives

to make the

food

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long lasting and better test.

This

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kind of preservative are directly

affect

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affected

affecting

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person

Suggestion

personal

health and

also

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contain higher risk of

food

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posioning

the physiological state produced by a poison or other toxic substance

poisoning

. There are lots of cases where

restaurant

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a restaurant

the restaurant

are serving

Suggestion

is serving

food

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that made two or three days ago.

Secondly

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this

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kind of prepared meals

have

Suggestion

has

high

amout

a quantity of money

amount

fat along with

cholestroal

an animal sterol that is normally synthesized by the liver; the most abundant steroid in animal tissues

cholesterol

that are

main cause

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the main cause

of cancer and fatness

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In conclusion, getting

ready made

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ready, made

food

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obvisouly

unmistakably ('plain' is often used informally for 'plainly')

obviously

a blessing for

busy pearson

Suggestion

busy people

busy person

the busy person

and cheap as

well but

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well, but

with the cost of health and lower

quality

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food

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can't

outweight

be heavier than

outweigh

it's

prons

that part of the central nervous system that includes all the higher nervous centers; enclosed within the skull; continuous with the spinal cord

brains

With the recent improvements to internet

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

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Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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330 words

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