Nowadays many people choose ready made food and refuse to cook at home. Why do you think it happens? What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a choice?

In recent year as seen that with the advancement of technology and
wild growth
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the wild growth
of globalization people are always working. With
this
tendancy
an attitude of mind especially one that favors one alternative over others
tendency
people are
prefered
made ready or fit or suitable beforehand
prepared
to get
food
delivered from a restaurant
insted
in place of, or as an alternative to
instead
of spending
time
to make
.
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.
Ordering and getting ready meal from outside home as own
advantage of
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advantage, of
cheap in price comes with cons of
quality
and higher risk of health.
To begin
with, there is no doubt that cooking takes
time
.
it's
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It's
not only making the
food
, it's
also
include
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included
the process of cleaning of dishes
,
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,
kitchen after preparing
meal
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meals
a meal
. That took a
considarble
large or relatively large in number or amount or extent or degree
considerable
considerably
amount of
time
of
person
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the person
. A
person
can utilise
this
time
for themselves, can spend with their loved ones
,
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,
can take rest and can do any other productive activity.As a busy
person
always working, getting meal from
restaurant
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the restaurant
a restaurant
is like blessing for him.
Moreover
, often
this
ready meals are cheaper and
easy
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easily
avaliable
obtainable or accessible and ready for use or service
available
that attracts more people to get them even for the people who are not busy. Another reason
is one
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is, one
can order
food
and get any
time even
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time, even
at 4 am in
morning thanks
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the morning, thanks
the morning thanks
to 24 hours
food
service and online
food
ordering service. As
flip side
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the flip side
of
coin
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the coin
, ready meal
also have
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also has
there
of them or themselves
their
cons.
First
and foremost concern is about the
quality
of the
food
. Usually,
this
kind of ready meals contains low
quality
ingredence
a component of a mixture or compound
ingredients
ingredient
along with lots of
preservative
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preservatives
to make the
food
long lasting and better test.
This
kind of preservative are directly
affect
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affected
affecting
to
person
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personal
health and
also
contain higher risk of
food
posioning
the physiological state produced by a poison or other toxic substance
poisoning
. There are lots of cases where
restaurant
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a restaurant
the restaurant
are serving
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is serving
food
that made two or three days ago.
Secondly
,
this
kind of prepared meals
have
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has
high
amout
a quantity of money
amount
fat along with
cholestroal
an animal sterol that is normally synthesized by the liver; the most abundant steroid in animal tissues
cholesterol
that are
main cause
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the main cause
of cancer and fatness
.
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.
In conclusion, getting
ready made
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ready, made
food
is
obvisouly
unmistakably ('plain' is often used informally for 'plainly')
obviously
a blessing for
busy pearson
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busy people
busy person
the busy person
and cheap as
well but
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well, but
with the cost of health and lower
quality
of
food
can't
outweight
be heavier than
outweigh
it's
prons
that part of the central nervous system that includes all the higher nervous centers; enclosed within the skull; continuous with the spinal cord
brains
.
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