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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In the present world, people are unnecessarily consuming
wastage
 which causes an environmental pollution. There are so many factors behind on increase of
garbage
. Even though, by taking proper precautions to reduce the amount of dust. In
this
 essay, I will illustrate with probable reasons to elaborate
further
.
Firstly
, population is the primary factor for increasing the
garbage
. Many countries are producing a lot of
wastage
 because of higher rate of population.
Secondly
, people are not taking as an accountability while producing
wastage
. They are so irresponsible when use groceries and
kitchenary
British field marshal (1850-1916)
Kitchener
utils
.
Consequently
, they prepare excess food which causes more
wastage
 in their dustbin.
Finally
, most of the countries are still using plastic bags which affects the environment badly.
Furthermore
, we
can not
can not
cannot
 easily destroy the plastic bags. Because it has a lot of carbon content which is difficult to burn. And
also
, it pollutes
air
Suggestion
the air
 too badly. Of course, if we take proper steps to reduce the
wastage
 at some extent. People have to know the impact of increased
wastage
. The government needs to guide them with proper awareness programmes which explains the cons of increased
garbage
 on global environment and steps to reduce that.
Moreover
, the government servants
also
 destroy the
garbage
 immediately at least once in a day. People
also
 more conscious while cooking with all their groceries. They have more calculated to prepare the enough food which will reduce the
wastage
. In conclusion, I would say that we cannot completely reduce the
wastage
 in a day. It takes time to reduce at some extent with above suggested ideas.
However
, the government could
also
 take a an major responsibility to protect the global environment.

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