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Men do most of the high-level jobs. Should the government encourage a certain percentage of these jobs to be reserved for women?What is your opinion on that?

#men #jobs #government #percentage #women
Some would argue that men are always placed as leaders in their jobs while
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
 says that the government should open the same opportunity for women. I believe that the government should give the same portion of leadership to women because they have the same quality as men and some position are better to be handled by women. Women nowadays are different from 30 years ago. They now have the same passion and dedication to study and to work in fields that mostly conducted by men
such
 as engineering and architecture. They have
also
 shown remarkable achievement as equal as men and manage to show their hard work, logical thinking, discipline and resilient attitude in order to strive for success.
For
example Oprah
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example, Oprah
 Winfrey manage to have a successful TV network because of her hard work. Several
position
Suggestion
positions
 are better to be handled by women because they have better
strtategy
an elaborate and systematic plan of action
strategy
strategies
 and they
also
 know how to manage it properly and gain trust from their targeted market.
Fashion industry
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The fashion industry
 is one of the examples and women who rules in
this
 industry
have manage
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have managed
 to make their mark as one of the most successful
leader
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leaders
. Donatela Versace is one of the most notorious leaders in the fashion industry in the 21st century and known for her successful brand Versace. In conclusion, the government are
advice
Suggestion
advised
 to save high-level jobs for women because I believe women will show their quality and strength same as men and
also
 will perform better if given a chance to rule in some positions.

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