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Family who sent their children to private school should not be require to pay taxes that support the state education system

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Some people argue that parents of children who sent their children to the private do not need
to supposed
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to suppose
 public
education
 though the taxes. Personally, I complete disagree with
this
 view. There are
variety
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varying
varied
 reasons why it would be wrong to reduce taxes for families who pay for private
school
.
Firstly
,
this
 would be difficult to calculate exactly discount for these families, and staff
would be require
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would require
would be required
 to manage
this
 complex process.
Secondly
, we all pay taxes for something we may no use,
for example
, many people are fortune enough not have to call the Police and fire brigade any time their life, but they would not refuse to tax for
this
.
Finally
, if
government
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the government
reduce
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reduces
number
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the number
 of amount of tax, we might have a situation that poor people pay more taxes than rich. In my opinion, we should all be happy to
paid
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pay
 for public
school
, it benefit for all
member
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members
 of society have a high quality
education
 system with equal opportunities for all young people.
Moreover
, it can be result in a large gap between public
school
 student and private student,
for example
 company owner will need well qualified and competent staff and a well funded
education
 system can provide
such
 employees
.
Accept space
.
and parents may see the advantages of their children’s life, it may push more parents sent their children to private
school
 and they would suffer from extra finance pressure In conclusion, I do not believe that any financial concession should be made for people who choose private
education

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