The pie charts represent 6 different regions that utilized water for industrial, agricultural and domestic purposes.
The pie charts represent 6 different regions that utilized
water
for industrial, agricultural and domestic purposes.
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Overall
, it is evident that the Linking Words
water
was primarily used for agriculture in Africa, Central Use synonyms
Asia
, Southeast Use synonyms
Asia
, and South Use synonyms
America
, Use synonyms
while
in North Linking Words
America
and Use synonyms
Europe
it was majority used by industries.
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,Europe
According to
the graph, Central Linking Words
Asia
's Use synonyms
water
usage for farming accounted for 88%. Use synonyms
Water
utilization for the same purpose in South Use synonyms
America
, Africa and Southeast Use synonyms
Asia
was Use synonyms
likewise
high about 71%, 84% and 81%, respectively, compared to merely 7% -19% of it Linking Words
were
for household consumption. Correct subject-verb agreement
was
Furthermore
, the aforementioned countries utilized Linking Words
water
for industrial purposes the least except for Southeast Use synonyms
Asia
, wherein Use synonyms
this
was Linking Words
second
in their Linking Words
water
consumption.
Meanwhile, North Use synonyms
America
and Europe used more Use synonyms
water
for their factories Use synonyms
at
48% Change preposition
apply
of
the former and 53% for the latter. Change preposition
for
Moreover
, both used the least Linking Words
water
for domestic Use synonyms
while
farming was used Linking Words
next
to industrial purposes.Linking Words
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