The pie charts represent 6 different regions that utilized water for industrial, agricultural and domestic purposes.
The pie charts represent 6 different regions that utilized
water
for industrial, agricultural and domestic purposes.
Overall
, it is evident that the water
was primarily used for agriculture in Africa, Central Asia
, Southeast Asia
, and South America
, while
in North America
and Europe
it was majority used by industries.
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,Europe
According to
the graph, Central Asia
's water
usage for farming accounted for 88%. Water
utilization for the same purpose in South America
, Africa and Southeast Asia
was likewise
high about 71%, 84% and 81%, respectively, compared to merely 7% -19% of it were
for household consumption. Correct subject-verb agreement
was
Furthermore
, the aforementioned countries utilized water
for industrial purposes the least except for Southeast Asia
, wherein this
was second
in their water
consumption.
Meanwhile, North America
and Europe used more water
for their factories at
48% Change preposition
apply
of
the former and 53% for the latter. Change preposition
for
Moreover
, both used the least water
for domestic while
farming was used next
to industrial purposes.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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