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why should you learn another language apart from english

#language #english
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I read with great interest your article
last
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 month about "it's useless to know another foreign language than English". Today I write you as a language teacher. I was very surprised by the turn of your article.
On the other hand
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, I think it's very important to learn other languages, a person is introduced to various cultures.
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 helps him to think of different ways. A survey shows that people who speak several languages, their chances to succeed increase by 22%.
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, English is really spoken by many peoples, but there are many people who speak French or Hindi in Asia. Knowledge of other languages ​​helps us find work in these countries.
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, there are many words in other languages ​​that are not found in English. In
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 situation, learning another language is incomplete for their interest because there is so much, a great variety of literature for others.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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