Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, while others think that this is the role of parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

These days,
discipline
is an ever increasing problem in contemporary schools.
Discipline
is extremely important so that children are well behaved, have self control and not become a failure in society. Some people think that
discipline
should be the responsibility of teachers, whilst others think that
this
is the role of parents. It is the aim of
this
essay to present the roles of both parents and teachers and
also
share my opinion about the argument above.
First
of all, I think
one
of the main duties of parents is to not spoil and pamper their child. Once a child is pampered, it is extremely hard to sculpt the child into a person with
discipline
.
Therefore
, parents need to be strict and
show
authority but
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authority, but
also
show
their children some respect so that they are not intimidated by their parents. Parents should
also
become a role model and
show
some
discipline
to their children
for example
by obeying traffic rules and so on.
Furthermore
, I think parents should educate their kids to be
discipline
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disciplined
by giving them chores and making sure they do them.
Secondly
, the roles of teachers. Teachers should not only educate students
academically but
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academically, but
also
educate them about
discipline
which is not emphasised in the curriculum. Teachers should
show
them the consequences of not being
discipline
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disciplined
and
also
inspire them to become a better person by telling them real-life success stories. Teachers should
also
punish students for their wrong doings
such
as not doing their homework, not obeying school rules and
many
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much
more. Teachers should
also
monitor students behaviours on a daily basis.  If
one
of the students does not
show
any signs of
discipline
, it is mandatory to give the student
one
on
one
counselling so that that student can be advised.  To sum it all up, parents cannot control their kids in school whilst teachers cannot educate students at home. In my opinion, both sides are equally important in instilling the virtue which is
discipline
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disciplined
into
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in
children. Lack of proper
parental
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parenting
and school
discipline
brings too
much
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many
drawbacks to not just them but the society. I hope that both sides join forces and not argue who has the larger responsibility to raise children that are disciplined

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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