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Many people believe that social networking sites such as facebook have had huge negative impact on both individaly and society. To what extent do you agree?

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A large cluster of people opine that public network websites
such
 as Facebook has been
influencing
Suggestion
influenced
 both personal life and society negatively.
However
, in my opinion,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 completely agree that it is keeping people away from each other and creating violence over the religion. To embark on, people are giving their most of the
time
 to these social sites. In order to become famous and
indcating
give an education to
educating
 others about their life's every
moments
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moment
, people are making their self busy on
this
.
For instance
, my cousin brother has an account which
is following
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is followed
will be followed
 by 2k people. He set a target to reach that account with 10k followers. He uploads video after offering his half day in editing that video to do so. Even though it takes their lot of
time
 to earn that money, they blow it on expensive things that they can post about it over the social sites.
For example
, there are many videos about unboxing costly gadgets. It is irrefutable that it has huge impact on the society. As the complexity of controlling the social network data, it is hard to ban the spreading of false information. It is easy to broaden fake news about religion which is the main cause of violence and hates among them. The wrong statements by the politicians is easy due to hacking of their account. A good example of
this
 is a riot on the streets of
Punjab where
Accept comma addition
Punjab, where
 60 Sikhs were killed as it was all initiated by a hacking of
an
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a
 political statement about
muslim
of or relating to or supporting Islamism
Muslim
. To conclude,
although
 it is impacting them negatively, people are becoming
habitual
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a habit
habit
 of it. People are passing their
time
 on it
instead
 of spending
time
 with their family which results in separating them from others.
Also
, dividing people among religion
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