In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In many countries nowadays, the majority of young people is not interested in news from both newspapers and
TV
. What are the causes of
this
? There
is
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are
a variety of reasons.
First
of all, young people have lost their confidence
into
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in
the media. They no longer consider
newssources
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news sources
like
TV
and newspapers as serious.
This
is because the past has often shown that those sources are inexact and with many errors.
This
sometimes happens by accident, but in more cases it is done on purpose in order to fit a story or a happening into todays political view. In Germany,
for example
, 95% of the newspapers and
TV
channels are government-owned and would never write
negativ
characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features
negative
about
politicans
a leader engaged in civil administration
politicians
or the government. Another reason for young people not reading or watching the news is the trend in our society towards less and less reading. Paper-based reading is really dying out nowadays. Young people no longer want to
spent
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spend
time on long articles or sitting in front of a
TV
screen in order to get informed about what is going on. They are
more casually
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more casual
and spend most time on communicating with friends on their Smartphone. The
third
reason I would like to mention is that young people are very self-
centered
being or placed in the center
centred
. They are simply not interested in news, as long as they are doing well. A way of getting young people back to the news would be to create confidence
into
Suggestion
in
the media again.
This
might be hard, because lost confidence cannot be regained very easily. One example would be, that media starts to admit where they have
done
produced by a manufacturing process
made
errors.
Moreover
, they should be
carefull
exercising caution or showing care or attention
careful
to present news neutral and independent from the political view.
Then
, there might be a chance that young people start to read the news a again. With the other points mentioned above, there is not very much we can do. It is a result of todays' welfare and technology.

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