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Acha ji fr tan is a good one for me and I love the idea of a good one with a good one in a good place in a lovely place?

#acha #ji #fr #love #idea #place
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below show
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below shows
 the sleep pattern of
people
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the people
 of the
society
 that favours the above trend of the section
on
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of
 your list of the
society
 that favours the above trend of
di
Suggestion
DI
do
audio
yiar
a period of time containing 365 (or 366) days
year
shiri
Suggestion
Shiri
 guru
granth
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Granth
saahab
formerly a term of respect for important white Europeans in colonial India; used after the name
sahib
di
Suggestion
DI
usari
da
ki
haal
hovega
ki
 uh is noon
lai
the syllable naming the sixth (submediant) note of a major or minor scale in solmization
la
lay
La
ke
unna
used of a single unit or thing; not two or more
one
 noon
vi
by way of
via
aapne
cause to open or to become open
open
naal
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Naal
mail
nail
lai
a white soft metallic element that tarnishes readily; occurs in rare earth minerals and is usually classified as a rare earth
La
ke
unna
used of a single unit or thing; not two or more
one
 noon is gall
da
definite article
the
do
pta
Suggestion
PTA
nhi
ki
 uh is gall
da
definite article
the
do
pta
Suggestion
PTA
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society
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of or belonging to us
our
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hoon
Suggestion
Hoon
ki
.
Krda
cardiovascular exercise
Cardio
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will be go
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will be gone
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will be go
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will be gone
 for a while to be making a comeback to
television industry
Suggestion
the television industry
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or
introduces an alternative
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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