In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is important to consider how

money

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the money

could be

spend

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spent

in

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on

transportation. While some people believe

that is

important to use the

money

for a new railway

lines

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line

, others argue that

this

money

should be

use

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used

to improve the existing public

transport

. In

this

essay I will discuss both sides of the argument and give my own opinion.

Firstly

, some

peolple

(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively

people

think

that is

important the construciton of

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important in the construction of

important the construction of

new railways.

This

happens because those who doesn't live in the

city

and they don't have a car, they require the train to go to the

city

. An example of that could be the people who use the train to go to work every day. Sometimes it could be difficult

cause

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causing

problems associated with the delays, technical problems or issues

of

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on

the train.

On the other hand

, other people argue that the

money

should be

spend

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spent

for better public transportation.

This

is because where the

people

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peoples'

peoples

lives need different ways to move faster, and sometimes isn't possible cause of the lack of

transport

in some parts of the

city

and

this

can be difficult to arrive

in

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at

a

destiantion

the place designated as the end (as of a race or journey)

destination

. To conclude, on one

hand it's

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hand, it's

important to consider a construction of new railways for the people who lives far from the

city

and needs to go to work and the other

hand there

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hand, there

are those who lives already in the

city

but needs public transportation to access some difficult areas in the

city

for lack of

transport

. In my view, cause I live in the

city

I'm more concerned to have better and more frequently public

transport

than new railways.