There have been some problems with the public transport you use to commute daily. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company. In your letter • Describe the problems • Explain how these problems are affecting you and others • Suggest what could be done about it

#transport #manager #company

Dear sir, I am a regular commuter on your

flashlist

Correct your spelling

flash list

flashlight

route, in recent times I have noticed a lot of dirt being left behind in the

coaches

and a lot of offensive drawings on the walls

also

. Realistically,

this

situation has had a negative effect on we the commuters. The dirt on

this

Correct determiner usage

these

show examples

coaches

generates awful odours that are harmful to our health. The offensive markings are a serious eyesore and all

this

together generates a negative ambience that can be a mood killer on your way to work. Despite all

this

Change the capitalization

show examples

feel there are solutions to

this

if you are truly concerned about our welfare on

this

Correct determiner usage

these

show examples

lines

Fix the agreement mistake

line

show examples

Firstly

Change the capitalization

show examples

recommend bin cans to be placed on every possible

corners

Change to a singular noun

corner

show examples

Change preposition

show examples

coaches

to eradicate incidents of refuse dumping.

Secondly

, cameras should be installed to monitor activities on

this

Correct determiner usage

these

show examples

coaches

and to let the pranksters know someone is watching. I believe if all

this

are implemented, customers confidence will be restored. I look forward to a prompt response from you. Yours faithfully Rotimi Samuel

Submitted by rotimi_oguntimoju on Tue Aug 13 2019

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Do you want to check your IELTS writing?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

175 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 checks
Get all the feedback you need to keep improving your charts and letters.
Unlimited Task 2 checks
Practice and perfect your skills with essays.
Personalized suggestions
Know how to boost your score.
Detailed mistakes analysis
Get instant feedback. Spot every mistake.
Topic ideas generator
Get topic-specific ideas to enhance your writing.
Vocabulary helper
Get the right words for any topic.
Progress tracking
Track your writing improvements.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

5
band
Every year several languages die out. Some people think this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
There is an ongoing debate on language extinction which happens several times every year. Some groups claim that the process of dying a language is of no importance. The logic behind this statement lies in the fact that they believe life would be easier if there were fewer languages in the world with which I deeply disagree.
6.5
band
Some people believe that money spent on space exploration is not justifiable. There are more beneficial ways to spend this money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, various people claim that the money spent on space exploration is unjustifiable. Also, they believe that these funds should be spent on more beneficial areas. Space exploration has not yielded benefits commensurate with the billions of dollars spent on it. I strongly agree that there are more usable things to spend these funds on.
4.5
band
You are getting married. Write a letter to your English speaking friend to him/her to the wedding. In your letter- describe who you are going to marry, tell what will happen on the wedding day (schedule) and explain why it is important him/her to be at the wedding
I hope this letter finds you well. I have a surprising news for you that I am getting married next month.
6.5
band
Some feel environmental issues should be solved within a country. Others feel they should be solved internationally. Discuss both the views and state opinion.
The question of whether environmental problems should be primarily addressed within a country’s border or on an international scale has sparked a contentious debate. Both perspectives hold merit, but a comprehensive strategy that combines national and international approaches is essential to effectively combat environmental challenges.
4
band
Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people. Identify the possible causes of this trend, and propose some solutions you think would be effective.
Crime among young people seem to be rising in many countries. The causes of this appear to be focused on two areas, and a number of solutions also appear to be possible. Perhaps the major factor is lack of parent upbringing of their children. Most crime committed by young derived from their parents who do not respond well to the needs of their children and provide little affection, support. Some parents also make very few demands on their children. This go a long way in their behavior at the societies at large. Another cause is lack of job. Most part time work tends to be poorly paid, with the result that those people and their family members need to meet the finding a way to provide their daily needs. Turning to the possible solutions, obvious step would be taken by parent to restore moral values to their children. This can go a long way of crime reduction. If we took this step it would reduce a crime of young people a long way. A second remedy might be for the State shou...

There have been some problems with the public transport you use to commute daily. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company. In your letter • Describe the problems • Explain how these problems are affecting you and others • Suggest what could be done about it

Every year several languages die out. Some people think this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some people believe that money spent on space exploration is not justifiable. There are more beneficial ways to spend this money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

You are getting married. Write a letter to your English speaking friend to him/her to the wedding. In your letter- describe who you are going to marry, tell what will happen on the wedding day (schedule) and explain why it is important him/her to be at the wedding

Some feel environmental issues should be solved within a country. Others feel they should be solved internationally. Discuss both the views and state opinion.

Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people. Identify the possible causes of this trend, and propose some solutions you think would be effective.