There have been some problems with the public transport you use to commute daily. Write a letter to the manager of the public transport company. In your letter • Describe the problems • Explain how these problems are affecting you and others • Suggest what could be done about it

Dear sir, I am a regular commuter on your

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route, in recent times I have noticed a lot of dirt being left behind in the

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and a lot of offensive drawings on the walls

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. Realistically,

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situation has had a negative effect on we the commuters. The dirt on

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generates awful odours that are harmful to our health. The offensive markings are a serious eyesore and all

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together generates a negative ambience that can be a mood killer on your way to work. Despite all

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,

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feel there are solutions to

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if you are truly concerned about our welfare on

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Firstly

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recommend bin cans to be placed on every possible

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to eradicate incidents of refuse dumping.

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, cameras should be installed to monitor activities on

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and to let the pranksters know someone is watching. I believe if all

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are implemented, customers confidence will be restored. I look forward to a prompt response from you. Yours faithfully Rotimi Samuel