Every year large numbers of people migrate from one country to another for different reasons. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of migration for the individual and for society as a whole.
Over the
last
century, the rate at which the population move from one Linking Words
country
to the other keeps increasing. Use synonyms
Although
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this
can be beneficial for both individuals and Linking Words
society
, Use synonyms
this
in effect has led to overpopulation of the Linking Words
society
. Use synonyms
This
essay will discuss Linking Words
further
on the pros and cons of Linking Words
such
transition in the Linking Words
society
and on the migrants.
One major benefit of migrating to another Use synonyms
country
is the Use synonyms
increase
in economic development of the Use synonyms
society
and its environment. Use synonyms
This
is due to the fact that, most countries welcoming Linking Words
migration
, give Use synonyms
such
opportunities to highly skilled labour, Linking Words
as a result
, Linking Words
this
in turn increases the economic standard of Linking Words
such
nation. Linking Words
For example
, they employ people that are skilled in some professional Linking Words
occupations which
will affect the community positively. Accept comma addition
occupations, which
In addition
, for the inhabitants, a large proportion Linking Words
migrate
to another city because they are of the believe that there is a higher standard of education which might not have been available from their departed Suggestion
migrates
country
. Use synonyms
Thus
, it is seen as a better offer and the opportunity to mix with people of diverse cultures. Linking Words
This
will Linking Words
further
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increase
their exposure to many people of diverse nationalities, cultures and their way of life. Use synonyms
For
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instance in
a survey carried out in the people's magazine, it was discovered that 70% of the people that migrated to China did so because of better quality of education.
On the one hand, migrating to another Accept comma addition
instance, in
country
may lead to overpopulation of the destination Use synonyms
country
. Use synonyms
This
is because Linking Words
majority
wants to move to a developed Suggestion
the majority
country
due to their high standard of living. They believe there are opportunities to get a job with a high paying wage. Use synonyms
Thus
, the Linking Words
increase
in the numbers of people moving to Use synonyms
such
nation is unavoidable thereby leading to congestion which Linking Words
might cause
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might cause an increase
increase
in pollution. Use synonyms
Additionally
, Linking Words
movement
to newer countries can Suggestion
moving
moved
also
lead to loss of skilled people from the departed Linking Words
country
, leaving their aged people to fend for themselves. Use synonyms
Finally
, Linking Words
migration
can lead to cultural clashes. People of different Use synonyms
culture
may want to assert their domination and rights in favour of other cultures. Suggestion
cultures
As a result
, strifes and fights may linger among the Linking Words
population which
could cause the people to take sides with their culture.
In conclusion, Accept comma addition
population, which
although
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migration
can be a significant and positive step in the Use synonyms
society
and individual life, Use synonyms
Linking Words
however it
might Accept comma addition
however, it
also
have some negative effects on the Linking Words
country
. In my opinion, the advantage Use synonyms
far outweigh
the disadvantages because of the benefits gotten from successful Suggestion
far outweighs
migration
.Use synonyms
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