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There is a growing evidence that man made activities are making global temperatures higher. what might be the man-made causes of temperature rising? How should we deal with this problem?

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Rise in global temperature is a major concern that
world
Suggestion
the world
 is facing today,
this
 is a phenomena under which the
temrature
the degree of hotness or coldness of a body or environment (corresponding to its molecular activity)
temperature
 of earth rises at
very high rate
Suggestion
a very high rate
,
this
 activity is
also
 known as global warming. Man made activities is the main reason behind it among few natural causes. Man made activities like industrialization, transportation causes global temperature rise,
on the other
hand exploitation
Accept comma addition
hand, exploitation
 of natural resources Weakens the ability for
earth
Suggestion
the earth
 to heal.
Thus
 the rate at which the global
temrature
the degree of hotness or coldness of a body or environment (corresponding to its molecular activity)
temperature
 is rising there is a strict need for action.
Hence
 the environmental laws are made, as
global temperature rise
Suggestion
the global temperature rise
 or global warming is something that in some way or other is impacting all of the countries in the world,
thus
 making countries go hand in hand to address the issues. Over
last
 few
decades industries
Accept comma addition
decades, industries
 in various sectors have to get government approval for carrying out activities that will impact the global warming, and
auto industry
Suggestion
the auto industry
are very rule
Suggestion
is very ruling
 bound about the automobiles produced. Among measures taken by government, private organizations and non government bodies are
also
 trying the address the issues. Many organizations are investing to find solutions for the problem.

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