solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. why is this? what are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy?

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There is no doubt that

solar clean

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solar, clean

energy

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is highly recommended and

spreaded

distribute or disperse widely

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between house tenants around the world due to its

sastainability

the property of being sustainable

sustainability

and serving the

enivironment

the totality of surrounding conditions

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. Some other people have been considered the new

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sourses

the place where something begins, where it springs into being

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source

as a limited time solutions and cause

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a great shortage

on the long term plan. I believe that

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solar new power

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the place where something begins, where it springs into being

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source

in the

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solution for our current

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health

enivironmental

of or relating to the external conditions or surroundings

environmental

, economic problematic situation. It has been known that the new generation of producing

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is the main vital role for the

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stratigics

relating to or concerned with strategy

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strategies

scientcts

a person with advanced knowledge of one or more sciences

scientists

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is the most important nations need as shown in the recent research which will cause several wars in the seen

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, so solving the

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(physics) a thermodynamic quantity equivalent to the capacity of a physical system to do work; the units of energy are joules or ergs

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the other hand, the new

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technologies

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does not

offer

permenant

continuing or enduring without marked change in status or condition or place

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solutions for the daily need of

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energy but

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energy, but

it will protect the environments for the wastes of the petrol

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which expose the human

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a characteristic state or mode of living

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to the untreated

decises

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will lead to a

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of comparatively great physical weight or density

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plan. In conclusion, while there are plus points to use the clean

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available source of wealth; a new or reserve supply that can be drawn upon when needed

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power, too much would be lost as

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having or showing knowledge and skill and aptitude

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available source of wealth; a new or reserve supply that can be drawn upon when needed

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

Renewable energy
Subsidies
Tax credits
Photovoltaic cells
Efficiency
Off-grid
Carbon footprint
Climate change
Initial investment
Energy security
Sustainability
Decarbonization
Grid parity
Feed-in tariff
Energy storage systems
Payback period
Net metering
Silicon panels

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solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. why is this? what are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy?

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