some people say that parents shouyld encourage their children to take part in organized group activities in their free time. others say it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The idea that children should occupy themselves during their leisure time is a frequent topic of discussion among parents. While some

peole

(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively

people

belive

accept as true; take to be true

believe

belief

believes

that children are to be encouraged to engage in organized

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activities, other people think that it is beneficial for them to be

a ble

(usually followed by 'to') having the necessary means or skill or know-how or authority to do something

able

to keep themselves occupied when they are less busy. In my opinion, I

belive

accept as true; take to be true

believe

children would benefit tremendously when they are exposed to working together in a

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rather than be independent.

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with, it is thought by some that parents are to persuade their young ones to take part in

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activities when they are less occupied and

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

completely agree.

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is because they learn how to work with their mates when they are together as a

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. With

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, they gain co-operation skill which is a vital skill for them in future as they are adequately prepared to enter the labour market. Again, children who take part in organized

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functions are exposed to the views of their peers and as

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they learn new ways of doing things.

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givces

cause to have, in the abstract sense or physical sense

gives

them a broader perspective to life and

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make certain of

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they become valuable members of the society.

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, interacting with others in

various activities help

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various activities to help

children develop competitive skills that will ultimately teach them the importance of working

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to become successful in life.

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, some people say that it is necessary for children to learn how to engage themselves without others, for the reason that they learn how to become independent. A child who is able to study on his own,

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, will be able to work independently and achieve outstanding performance with less supervision. Again, children can develop the habit of working with minimal support, if they learn how to engage themselves on their own.

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skill will be useful in future when they set out on their own as it gives them an edge over and above their counterparts.

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, they considerably become self-sufficient as they begin to realize that they can outperform others

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in absence of

without

looking up to others for support. In

concusion

a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration

conclusion

, while some say it is vital for children to develop how to engage themselves alone,

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refers to the speaker or writer

I

strongly believe it will be extremely useful for them to learn the skills of cooperation and competition when

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people in general

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are involved in

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activities in their free time.