It is thought by some that its better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Recently
,
people Accept space
,
are migrating
from one place to another.Some individuals think that urban Suggestion
have migrated
life
is better as comapred
to rural examine and note the similarities or differences of
compared
life
. In this
essay both sides will be discussed and in the conclusion part my opinion will be presented.
In the present world,
Accept space
,
younger generation
Suggestion
the younger generation
are migrated
more into Suggestion
is migrated
city
life
in terms of employment.Employment oppertunity
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunity
are
more which attract youth to settle in the Suggestion
is
city
.Furthermore
,
One Accept space
,
another
great advantage of not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
city
life
is public transport .
Accept space
.
For example
, recent surveys have claimed that for better livelihood people are moving from countryside to downtowns
due to various job Suggestion
downtown
downturns
donations
oppertunities
as well as transportation a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunities
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provided by the public a building or place that provides a particular service or is used for a particular industry
facilities
goverment
.
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
Eventhough
Suggestion
Even though
,
Those who care about Accept space
,
environment prefer
to stay at Accept comma addition
environment, prefer
rural
Suggestion
the rural side
side
of the city
. As compared to city
, country side
are not much polluted becaue
of inadequate transport for the reason that; on account of
because
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. a building or place that provides a particular service or is used for a particular industry
facility
facilities
In addition
,
Due to less population these places are very calm and Accept space
,
quiet which
in terms of saving from Accept comma addition
quiet, which
noice
pollution.sound of any kind (especially unintelligible or dissonant sound)
noise
For instance
, In Canada 95 percent of the people who are above 60 years of age prefer to live in rural population due to environmental problems which causes health issues .
To stay Accept space
.
at
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on
in
better
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the good
side they
prefer Accept comma addition
side, they
countryside
.
To sum upSuggestion
the countryside
,
In my opinion Accept space
,
city
life
will be better for the present generation because of job oppertunity
as well as transport Suggestion
a job opportunity
job opportunity
job opportunities
fascility
.a building or place that provides a particular service or is used for a particular industry
facilities
However
,
Accept space
,
country
Suggestion
the country side
side
is also
better to stay but
Accept comma addition
stay, but
i
would not prefer because of low jobs as well as transportation refers to the speaker or writer
I
fascility
.a building or place that provides a particular service or is used for a particular industry
facilities
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