There is increase of noise in our daily lives nowadays. Why is this a problem? What can be done to reduce it?

The trending up rise of sound pollution in our day to day lives, poses great danger to all living creatures. There are a number of ways to curb
this
menace like, stoppage of the use of automobiles, government policy promoting the installation of sound proof in companies, churches, and studios. One of the major problems faced with sound pollution now a
days
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day
is the health challenge associated with it.
That is
when we exposed to
disturbing sounds
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the disturbing sounds
for a while, it destroys the
typmpanic
resembling a drum
tympanic
membrane and ear
ossicles
which are responsible for the protection of the inner ear.
This
further
damages the inner
ear causing
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ear, causing
permanent deafness. A study conducted by a group of scientists
in
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at
Havard University
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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