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Libraries should be shut down as better alternatives are available.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#libraries #alternatives
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In the recent times, an immense development has taken
place
 in the technological area, people nowadays it has become more convenient for people to access and read any information online.
However
, it has been a controversial topic among people, whether we need the existence of libraries are not in our community today.In my view, libraries are an important
place
 to gain knowledge and build bonds between people, so their existence plays a vital role. To start with, libraries have been existing since centuries. It is a quiet
place
, where people can without distraction indulge in reading books. It
also
 consists of a number of books which might not be available online.
In addition
, it is
also
 a source of income for the writers. Thou some agree on publishing their work online, a number of them may not.
Also
, along with availability, the content available online can be a pirated version,
this
 would not be beneficial for the writer and the reader as well.
Moreover
, the physical
book
 can help in creating a feel of the
book
. It
also
 helps in impacting a greater interest among people to read books.
In addition
,
library
Suggestion
the library
also
 helps
on
Suggestion
in
 building social engagement among people. People who enjoy reading together around can be at one
place
 together, and can share their views on the books read, which can
also
 help in building bond among people. Some libraries
also
 organise events
such
 as,
book
 reading
,
Accept space
,
writing competitions
etc
 which can
further
 help at bring people in the society closer. In conclusion, reading books in the traditional way is vital, the digital gadgets cannot replace the feel of the
book
.
Hence
,
libraries existence
Suggestion
the library's existence
library's existence
 in our society is significant.
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