Certain personal qualities cannot be achieved through university studies. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and relevant examples

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modern competitive word

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, many people believe that chasing after academic courses helps in building their carrier and certain individuals opine that in

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race, these people are losing important traits. I completely agree that education cannot develop important personal qualities like dedication, loyalty, honesty, politeness to have a contribution towards your professional life

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without having the trait of tolerance towards other’s faith, it may be impossible to construct a tolerant

society

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, many academic courses like engineering, law and accounts merely focuses on

technical parts

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the technical parts

of the subject. During the course, they just cram the ideas, spending

number

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a number

of hours, leading them to aspirant whose main aim of life is to draw higher salaries which can render them a luxurious life. People from these

school

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schools

of thought always tend to run low on important qualities as mentioned above. Without these personal qualities, they may be a boon in certain businesses in

initial stage but

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the initial stage, but

the initial stage but

initial stages but

over the passage of time they do not reflect significant

qualities

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qualities, hence

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they fail to prove their ability and earn respect in their respective fields.

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, as per survey conducted by American times magazine in 2012 on charismatic leaders

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it was proved that without having the personal qualities, individuals could not reach to

leadership position

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leadership positions

a leadership position

in their respective fields and

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they start developing negative attitude and fails to make a significant impression in their lives as well as their professions. With the student exchange program and globalization,

world

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the world

is moving towards the place where people of different cultures and faith need to exist and work together. In

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scenario, tolerance needs to be imbibed in these citizens. Until now, most of the education system in the world

have not started

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has not started

any major programme to address the issues which may be arising from above developments.

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, in India since the partition of countries, Indian curriculum have shown the contribution of national leaders like Mr. Mahatma Gandhi, Mr. Jawaharlal

lal

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Lal

Nehru who stressed on pluralistic

society

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and tolerant

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.

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particular factor have acted as precursor to develop a Indian nation as most tolerant nation

among

the particular occupation for which you are trained

career

its neighboring countries To sum up, I believe that education fails to imbibe personal qualities which contributes to one’s carrier and

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does not address the concept of tolerance which is important to construct a pluralistic

society

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