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In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors, may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, should be done about it?

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Unemployment is one of the critical
phase
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phases
 that many young minds face post graduation.It is a factor that has remained unchanged over a long period of time in many parts of the world. Students need to understand the requisites of the job market.In brief
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skill-sets can be classified as technical and non-technical skill-sets.
Non-technical
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Nontechnical
 skills
such
 as communication skills
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practical experimentation
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flexibility to adapt
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logical thinking are as as important a degree holds.
Also
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the technical
knowlege
the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
 acquired by a student must be of relevance to the job that they are looking for. While the syllabus helps to pick up the
theoritical
concerned primarily with theories or hypotheses rather than practical considerations
theoretical
vertical
 aspects of the subject,
skillsets train
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skill sets, train
skill sets train
 the graduates to experiment the practical methodologies.Another mishap is, some universities fail to upgrade the syllabus as well as provide an insight about the working environment, which inversely means that students are not updated with the current technology and fail to grab their opportunity.
On the other hand
, communication skills
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 the primary launch pad in order to get appointed.
Although
 the candidates are on par with the job trend
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lack of communication ends up being a loss factor.The driving factor for
this
detoriation
a symptom of reduced quality or strength
deterioration
distortion
 is low confidence level
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poor fluency or even unclear objectives.Not only oratorical skills need to be developed
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good presence of mind
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mental strength
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ablity
the quality of being able to perform; a quality that permits or facilitates achievement or accomplishment
ability
 to adapt
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positive attitude
etc
continuing in the same way
etc.
 are
also
 pivotal in getting placed.
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