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Some people think that the most important thing the rich can do with his money is to help people. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

#people #money
As the topic suggests about the perception of some people that rich people should use
there
of them or themselves
their
money
 to help others. I agree
to
Suggestion
with
 the topic. Rich people are capable of helping other people because they have enough
money
 to sustain their life and still have enough to help people in need. I have seen people going a way out of
there
of them or themselves
their
 league to just help
someone
 in need. It may not be the person with
money
. A person with
good heart
Suggestion
a good heart
 will
also
 help
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
. Said that, people with the capability of helping others should do it and spread a message that they are there to help the society or
someone
 in need. But that doesn't mean he is obligated to always help
someone
. He should be willing to spend his hard earn
money
 on others and
this
 is where the Rich's fall back. I have friends who are rich but they only spend
money
 on themselves. Which is right
to
Suggestion
for
 them. But looking at the society as a whole, we need more people who can come up and support the community.
However
, it should be
complusary
required by rule
compulsory
. Helping or providing support is something you get from your upbringing. And kids learn these watching
someone
 do
such
 acts and that same child when grows up will help
someone
 in need. I would like to conclude
this
 topic by saying that rich people should help
other bu
Accept comma addition
others, but
others but
t there are
lo
Suggestion
a lot
t other things which are important as much as helping
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