You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course. You now find that you can not continue the course. Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter, • describe the situation • explain why you cannot continue at this time • say what action you would like to take

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Dear

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Ahmed I am writing you

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letter to express my desire to stop the English course for about three months because I have joined a new job. I wish you can postpone my level

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I return back. I am Heba Mahmoud; I am working as a special needs teacher in a local school in Egypt. I had a new job opportunity in a rehabilitation

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in Dubai . It

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temporary job from June to August only. I am going to gain a massive experience and really, I do not want to lose it. So that I need to stop attending the General English course for a while . Actually, I keen to finish it; as you know, it is the

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level of the 13 levels, which are I already attended

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help me stopping my registration to level thirteen and postpone it to

September. I will be glad if you appreciate the situation and offer any kind of help. I look forward to hearing from you soon.

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sincerely, Heba Mahmoud

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