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SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT YOUNG PEOPLE SHOULD SPEND THEIR FREE TIME WITH FAMILY, RATHER THAN GO TO ENTERTAINMENT ACTIVITIES OUTSIDE THE HOUSE. SOME DISAGREE. DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINIONS.

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In the recent times, it has been observed that youngsters hardly spend any
time
 with their families. Most of their free
time
 is spent outside homes in parties or other fun activities. Though these extra-curricular activities are as essential as other things, their free
time
 should be divided wisely and a major portion of it should be spent with the family. Young people are at a risk of being mislead. Their minds are less firm and their
morales
motivation based on ideas of right and wrong
morals
 are not as strong. Spending excessive
time
 out of the house
in
Suggestion
during
 parties or in wrong company can
encourge
contribute to the progress or growth of
encourage
 them to develop bad habits. Some people get involved in crimes and drugs.
Therefore
, people strongly advocate to monitor activities of youngsters. Some go as far as to put
exessive
beyond normal limits
excessive
 restraints on their free times and strict orders are given to spend
time
 at home.
However
, an extremist approach in
this
 respect will not be fruitful as teenage children are less likely to respond to strict rules. Another school of thought encourages youngsters to get involved in as much extra-curricular activities as possible. As most of the
time
 is spent at home, people believe that the free
time
 should be spent outside
home
Suggestion
the home
. It is said that young people are energetic and they should enjoy their
time
 to the fullest.
Moreover
,
entertainment activities
Accept comma addition
entertainment, activities
 like watching movies, going to parties or games stimulate creativity in young people and broaden their horizons. Social interactions with their friends and colleagues enhance their social abilities and shape them to be better individuals. What I propose is - a balanced
time
-table covering all social as well as family
time
 should be devised where once a week family bonding
activities
Suggestion
activity
 must be included.
This
 may include any form of sports like fishing, playing cricket or tennis. Frequent sight seeing and picnics must be planned in which youngsters can rejoice and enjoy
time
 with their family.
This
time
 can be used to strengthen family values and increase love between the members and children can connect on a better level with their parents.
Similarly
,
time
 should be allocated to fun
activites
any specific behavior
activities
 with friends and colleagues where youngsters can learn mutual respect and practice living like adults without parental supervision. To recapitulate, both ideas are valid;
however
 a balance of free
time
 activities for a youngster is vital. Spending
time
 with the family is as important as entertainment activities. I strongly believe that if fun activities are inculcated in the family
time
, youngsters are likely to devote their free
time
 to family.
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