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Writing Samples
Band 6.5

Your colleague found another job and invited you to his/her farewell party. Unfortunately you are unable to attend it. Write a letter to him/her and say – Why can’t you attend the party? – Why did you enjoy working with him/her? – Offer him/her to meet some other time.

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Dear Smith, I am writing
this
 letter with
the
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 heavy heart as I am going to
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lose
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loose
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lose
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best
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 colleague and best soul that I had ever seen in my life. I am more than happy
for
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 your new opportunity,but accept my deep apology as I am not able to make
to
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 your farewell function as I have to pick up my parents from the airport on the same day. As you're aware of since
last
 summer my parents are thinking about
to move
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 with me so we both can feel
as
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family
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 and could spend some quality time together. So they have decided to come here on 20th of march and they will be landing
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to
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 Airport around 4:30PM. I always found you helping others as well me in every possible way you can.
Moreover
,your calm and
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quite
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nature
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 with
the
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 great sense of humour is like
cherry
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the cherry
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 on the cake. I will definitely
going
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 to miss your absence. I have
plan
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 to make up for not attending
function
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the function
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. Let's hang out someday near to
next
 weekend at my house as by that time my parents
also
 will settle down with
environment
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 of the town. As you knew they always wanted you to meet. Your house is not that
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far from mine. Again,I am really sorry for that. Wish you have a great future and continue growing as a person and career. Yours Faithfully, Robert
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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