In many countries, people like to eat a wide variety of food that can be grown in other areas. As a result, people eat more food produced in other regions than local food. Do the disadvantages of this trend outweigh its advantages?

The idea of eating a wide variety of
food
grown in other areas is in people's mind. As a consequence, people would like to eat
food
produced in other nations rather than local
food
.
Although
there are some drawbacks of
this
trend
, I would argue that there are some more benefits. On the one hand,
this
trend
will provide a diverse number of products
for
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from
local countries. In fact, people could buy a lot of foods which are not produced in their country or
are as
a particular geographical region of indefinite boundary (usually serving some special purpose or distinguished by its people or culture or geography)
areas
not good as other countries.
as
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As
a result, people will enjoy
better quality
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a better quality
of life.
For example
, In Viet Nam, a wide range of fruits
are imported
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is imported
from foreign
countries especially
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countries, especially
in
Europe
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Europe, such
such
as: Germany, France,
therefore
they will have more choices in purchasing fruits with high quality and high satisfaction.
In addition
, with exchanging products among regions will help the economic development. Because
this
trend
indeed increases
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has indeed increased
the economic output and relationships among nations to motivate exportation.
For instance
, rice in Viet Nam
are exported
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is exported
to Europe leads to Viet Nam ranks number 2 in rice exporting in the world, so the
economic
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economy
in Viet Nam is on significant growth.
On the other hand
, foods are imported from other countries are as not fresh as local country due to
this
plural of "this"
these
foods have to be transported in a long time with long distance.
As a result
, the fruits might get rotten and other foods go off, it is a negative
effects
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effect
for local's finance.
Besides
, the
food
of a region reflects its customs and cultures, if people continue importing a lot of foods from other regions, some local special
food
may diminish which would be loss of
food
culture. In conclusion, I
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believed
that eating more foods from other regions than local foods brings a lot of benefits, but the disadvantages of
this
trend
should be taken into consideration.

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