In many countries it is now illegal to smoke in public places. It is only fair that people who wish to smoke should have to leave the building. Do you agree or disagree?

Smoking is a killer disease and deteriorates human

health

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severly

to a severe or serious degree

severely

. It not only affects the

smoker but

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smoker, but

the

pasive

lacking in energy or will

passive

person too. While in many

countries there

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countries, there

is a ban on smoking in

pulblic

not private; open to or concerning the people as a whole

public

areas

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However many

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However, many

suggest that smokers whenever had the desire to smoke should leave the public

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Premises

. Whereas

i

refers to the speaker or writer

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am

concerend

feeling or showing worry or solicitude

concerned

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,

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refers to the speaker or writer

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agree with

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notion.

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essay will examine my

view point

a mental position from which things are viewed

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in the following paragraphs along with the conclusion. Banning smoking in public region is a great measure taken by the government to overcome

health

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problems of the civilians.

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given

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giving

tremendous warnings by

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memebers

one of the persons who compose a social group (especially individuals who have joined and participate in a group organization)

members

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,

still its not

haulted

cause to stop

halted

heated

hated

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so

to a very great extent or degree

So

eventualy

after an unspecified period of time or an especially long delay

eventually

officials put a complete ban on

smoke

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smoking

on

pulbic

not private; open to or concerning the people as a whole

public

areas in order to save the

peope

(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively

people

from the risk of diseases caused by smoking

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a recent study done by

health

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today revealed that the smoke emitted from one

cigrette

finely ground tobacco wrapped in paper; for smoking

cigarette

suffocate

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suffocates

the lungs of 2-3 passive smokers along with the smokers itself

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Thus in

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general the both the smoker as

wel

(often used as a combining form) in a good or proper or satisfactory manner or to a high standard ('good' is a nonstandard dialectal variant for 'well')

well

as the passive smoker is equally affected from the fumes of tobacco.

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the other reasons to curtail smoking in public regions is that in some misfortune times due to minor

neglegency

failure to act with the prudence that a reasonable person would exercise under the same circumstances

negligence

while smoking or discarding it in wrong manner may lead to

fire blaze

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a fire blaze

which may result in

destruction

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the destruction

of the public property or may turn into

cassualities

someone injured or killed or captured or missing in a military engagement

casualties

risking the life of the people

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Specially near the combustible places

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as hospital

premisis

land and the buildings on it

premises

, storage blocks, petrol pumps or gas

engencies

an administrative unit of government

agencies

.

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Thus

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associating

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factors

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ban is acceptable by many people. To conclude, seeing all the

illeffects

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ill effects

caused by smoking in public

places i

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places, I

places I

completely

favor

promote over another

favour

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wise decision of the authorities and want that public should

also

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implement it strictly So avoid any future problems caused by smoking

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