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You should spend no more than 40 minutes on this task. As part of a class assignment you have to write about the following topic. Millions ofpeople every year move to English-speaking countries such as Australia, Britain or America, in order to study at school, college or university. Why do so many people want to study in English? Why is English such an important international language? Give reasons for your answer. You should write at least 250 words.

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The number of international students who travel abroad to seek education has increased significantly in the
last
 decade. The majority of students prefer to study in English-speaking
countries mainly
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countries, mainly
 USA, UK and Australia. There are many reasons for their decision, one point is that English will improve their future employment prospects, the other point is that English can be used to communicate with others while travelling since there are millions of people who can speak in English around the
world
.
English
Suggestion
The English language
language
 has a great importance in the
world
 today.
Firstly
, globalization has enabled many international companies to work overseas and
since
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for
 employees may come from different countries, English will be the spoken
language
 in the workplace. No wonder in the job search portals, it is normal to find that it is required to speak fluent English or have
IELTS certificate
Suggestion
an IELTS certificate
 to be nominated for a job. Studying in English-speaking countries will help students immerse themselves in the culture,
consequently
, will be able to acquire the
language
. Apparently, having a decent job is one of the main
motivation
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motivations
 to study abroad in
USA
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the USA
 or UK. Another point is that, English
language
 is used while travelling abroad and it is accepted as a medium of communication in many tourist countries.
For instance
, in Thailand, as a main tourist hub, they are speaking Thai
language
,
however
, a tourist will be able to go around with English with no difficulties.
Therefore
, English speakers can explore more countries with less hassle than speakers of other languages. English
language
 is very important
language
 because there are many books and scientific research are conducted in English.
In addition
 the USA, as a superpower, has a great cultural and academic influence in the
world
. American movies are very popular in the
world
 as well. In Summary,
English
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the English language
language
 has a great presence in the academic
world
. More students are choosing to pursue their studies in English. It is predicted that
this
 trend will continue to grow in the future.

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