the diagram shows how concentrated apple juice is produced

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concentrated

apple

juice is made. There are eleven main stages which consist of harvesting

apples

, producing and packaging the

apple

juice

then

delivery

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it.

To begin

with,

apples

are harvested from the tree and picked out

the

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best

apples

. Those

apples

are received by the conveyor belt to bring to the washing and sorting step. After that, the

apples

are put into the

apple

grinder to cut and crush them

to

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into

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the

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apple

slices.

Next

, the

apples

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slices are added to the pressing machine

then

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and then

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to the

cetrifuger

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centrifuge

machine and the water

are

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separated from

apple

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the apple

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concentration.

Next

stage

,

aroma

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the aroma

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is added to the concentration before the filtration

stage

. After the filtration

stage

, the pasteurization

stage

is where the concentrate

are

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heated to 80°C temperature. Once

above

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the above

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steps are completed, the concentration will be moved to the

bottle filling

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stage

and

then

be packaged in the boxes.

Finally

, when the bottle of concentrated

apple

juice

are

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packaged, those boxes will be delivered to the

costumer

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customer

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.