In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?

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I am writing
this
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letter to request the separate amenities
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for
each of
student
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the student
a student
at our college hostel. I hope that you will resolve
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problem as soon as possible. Currently, I am sharing a
room
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with another classmate in Block-A building. I have a good relationship with my
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room-mate
an associate who shares a room with you
roommate
roommates
.
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, we felt little uncomfortable with
room
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furniture. We have to adjust with one chair, single queen size bed which is really
congusted
overfull as with blood
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to us. It is very problematic to do
home work
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homework
in a
room
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.
Some times
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, we have to do night-outs to prepare exams. At that time, we cannot adjust with
single chair
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a single chair
and table.
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,
room
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has one
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to keep all our clothes which
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,
through out
all the way through
throughout
our college hostel is facing
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similar issues
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. So, I am requesting that to arrange above mentioned amenities for all the rooms which will be
great benefit
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a great benefit
for us to focus on our studies. Please respond at the earliest convenience. Thank you.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Aging population
  • Elderly care
  • Nursing homes
  • Social welfare
  • Intergenerational responsibility
  • Caregiving
  • Financial burden
  • Quality of life
  • Pension funds
  • Healthcare policy
  • Taxation
  • Subsidies
  • Private insurance
  • Long-term care
  • Sustainability
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