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Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the countryside. Why do think this is? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

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Immigration of the youth from the countryside to live in the
urbanism
Suggestion
Urbanism
 in a phenomenon in most developing countries. While
olding
(Norse mythology) ruler of the Aesir; supreme god of war and poetry and knowledge and wisdom (for which he gave an eye) and husband of Frigg; identified with the Teutonic Wotan
Odin
 still
staying
Suggestion
stays
 in the rural.
Therefore
,
tis
denotes a person or thing
this
 offers a few advantages and
also
 some disadvantages which are worth considering. On one hand, there are two main benefits to leave the rural going to the cities.
Firstly
, peoples always search for a good life with
educational
Suggestion
education
, medical services and workable infrastructure.
In addition
, they will be exposed to different customs
as a result
, they will gain a deeper understanding of the world.
Secondly
, increasing in urban population will have a
well
Suggestion
good
 effect on industrial sectors which need large numbers of
labors
someone who works with their hands; someone engaged in manual labor
labourers
.
On the other hand
, various drawbacks may be noted. In the
first
 place, increasing urban population could cause bad in quality of life and services which citizens of urban are gaining and could
made
Suggestion
make
 society unstable in
social aspect
Suggestion
a social aspect
the social aspect
.
Furthermore
, the agricultural products will be
decreasing
Suggestion
decreased
 because
numbers
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the numbers
 of peoples who working in
this
 field will be low when they going to towns and the old peoples couldn’t
affordable
Suggestion
afford
 the work of the land. In conclusion, economical and social are two important aspects of the development of a country in order to save the stability of the society.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
, the government should pay attention
of
Suggestion
on
 the negative
effectives
property of a personal character that is portable but not used in business
effects
 of immigration of the young peoples to urban.

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