The only way to solve the increasing crime rate of young offenders is to teach parents better parenting skills. To what extent do you agree?

Nurture is
essential element
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an essential element
in
bulilding
a structure that has a roof and walls and stands more or less permanently in one place
building
up
community's moral system
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a community's moral system
,
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because when it has been done greatly
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anyother
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any other
consequences will be
also
great
.
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Iam totally percieve
Suggestion
I am totally perceiving
I am totally percieve
I totally perceive
I am totally perceived
Iam totally perceive
I have totally perceived
that the nurture process is the most
difficulit
not easy; requiring great physical or mental effort to accomplish or comprehend or endure
difficult
process
that is
required awareness classes for mother and father
,
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In
this
essay I will investigate the causes of necessity for parenting courses. It is claimed that parenthood is the most complicated skill
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that the one could have acquired
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Because the newly born child will
refram
the part of a song where a soloist is joined by a group of singers
refrain
reform
which efforts have been
done
produced by a manufacturing process
made
for him
,
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,
addationaly
in addition, by way of addition; furthermore
additionally
he will
frame
create (as an entity)
form
the backbone of his
countrey
a politically organized body of people under a single government
country
county
century
.
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For instance
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many research studies have been shown that the good nurture for any child will exclude that he will take a leading part
regardidng
with regard or relation to
regarding
his physical
,
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,
social
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spititual
concerned with sacred matters or religion or the church
spiritual
,
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,
psychological and emotional integrity.
Moreover
, the
canadian
of or relating to Canada or its people
Canadian
stastics
a branch of applied mathematics concerned with the collection and interpretation of quantitative data and the use of probability theory to estimate population parameters
statistics
that have been published in The
Gurdian
a person who cares for persons or property
guardian
garden
magazian which
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magazine, which
magazine which
magazines which
proved that offspring who are under supervision of their mothers and fathers
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they perform in school and other
activitiesbetter
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activities better
than others students who they without parents by their side
Furthermore
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there are many
american
of or relating to the United States of America or its people or language or culture
American
statistics that
have been proved
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have proven
that youth crimes were linked to poor nurture
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;
It is mostly because these parents lack the certain
knoweldge
the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
and related skills for
children
Suggestion
child
raising.
Althogh
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Although
these young adults are committing really bad
affairs they
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affairs, they
tend to have quite bright
prespectives
a way of regarding situations or topics etc.
perspectives
inside them
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This
is
exampelified
be characteristic of
exemplified
by a lot of research that has been done by several
psychologist
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psychologists
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and they illustrated when authorities kept these
threatning
threatening or foreshadowing evil or tragic developments
threatening
adults in convenient conditions
,
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,
they will become the communities ' future.

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