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In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details.

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In
 recent
years it
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years, it
 is tedious to get any
job
, yet some teenage
student
get
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gets
 some
oppurtunity
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunities
to
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To
 do some small time
work
.
however
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However
, students working at their young age
is subjected
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are subjected
 to discussion.
in
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In
 my
opinion i personally
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opinion, I personally
opinion I personally
 support that
job
 will enhance the responsibility
,
Accept space
,
 maturity and
finacial
involving financial matters
financial
 independent among students
.
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.
to
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To
 begin with, teenage
job
 will enhance the
responsiblity
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
 and reliability among the students.
job
the principal activity in your life that you do to earn money
Job
 with salary will allow them to understand the working nature of the world and prepare them for the future,
hence
 it will help to adapt
for
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to
 the full time
job
 in
future
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the future
.
in
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In
addtion
a component that is added to something to improve it
addition
 to that, teenage
job
 will elevate the
reliablity
the quality of being dependable or reliable
reliability
 among
student
,
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,
hence
 they will take the
job
more serious
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more seriously
 and accomplish
wonder
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wonders
.
furthermore
in addition
Furthermore
,
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,
work
 will induce the maturity among the
student
.
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.
for
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For
 instance
,
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,
student
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students
a student
 who
work
 will have the ability to control the desire of the
unneccassary
not necessary
unnecessary
 items as they know the value of the money.
moreover
in addition
Moreover
,
tennage
being of the age 13 through 19
teenage
job
 will enhance their confidence and
diminesh
decrease in size, extent, or range
diminish
diminishes
diminished
 their shyness.
similarly
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Similarly
, students will be financially independent
.
Accept space
.
for
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For
 instance
,
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,
 the
surevey
consider in a comprehensive way
survey
 conducted by the
indian
a member of the race of people living in America when Europeans arrived
Indian
 government has
show
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shown
 that
student
 who
work
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works
 had not taken any loan
,
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,
thus
 supporting themselves through their earning
.
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.
as
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As
 well as
,
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,
finacial
involving financial matters
financial
 savings will provide them
flexibility
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the flexibility
 to take any additional courses to help their career
.
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.
all
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All
 things considered, teenage
job
 will allow them to acquire the
value quality
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value, quality
 like responsibility
,
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,
reliablity maturity
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reliability, maturity
reliability maturity
 among
student
,
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,
 which is impossible to acquire in the
therotical
concerned primarily with theories or hypotheses rather than practical considerations
theoretical
 education.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 personally suggest that teenage
job
 is mandatory for them to shape their future.
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