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People say that success is 10 percent talent and 90 percent hard work. Do you agree or disagree and give your opinion

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Achievement of a set goal is a major attribute of
success
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. To achieve a desired outcome, one must be hard working and to an extent possess skills that will enable a positive result. It is partly agreed that some level of
talent
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 and a higher level of hard
work
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 is necessary to be successful. Analysing the role of
education
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 as a tool that facilitates one to attain
success
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, as well as describing
success
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 as a combined effort of hard
work
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 and
talent
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 will prove
this
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.
Firstly
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, people get well-rounded by studying a course to acquire skills.
For instance
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, most musicians undergo vocal training and attend musical schools to achieve
success
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 in their line of business.
Thus
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, most skills are acquired through
education
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 because most of them are not inherent.
As a result
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, studying a desired course enables one to achieve
success
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.
Secondly
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, to attain a desired result, a lesser degree of
talent
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 and higher level of hard
work
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 is required. To illustrate, Lionel Messi is presently the world’s best footballer of the year and was naturally gifted with dribbling right from childhood, he had no form of
education
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 to boast his
talent
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. But
succeded
attain success or reach a desired goal
succeeded
 with continuous practice and hard
work
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.
Also
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, combination of gift and hard
work
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 gave rise to
he’s
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his
success
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 today.
Therefore
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, a degree of
talent
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 and hard
work
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 is needed to gain a desired outcome. In conclusion, to become successful
,
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,
 there should be skills acquired through
education
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 and
also
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 the incorporation of expertise and industrious attitude.
Therefore
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, it is clear that learning a skill is
also
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 a way to accomplish
sucess
an event that accomplishes its intended purpose
success
, as well as
talent
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 and hard
work
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.

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