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Some people claim that not enough of wastes from homes is recycled. They say that that only way to increase recycling for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

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It is argued that garbages from homes are not reused sufficiently for which the government needs to implement strict laws.
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 essay completely agrees that forming rules and regulations regarding the waste management can result into efficient reprocessing and preserve our natural environment. Most of the people neglect the damaged that has already happened to our environment due to illegal dumping, burning of waste and too much use of plastic. At the same time, we continue to produce plastic which doesn’t decompose quickly. Due to lack of recycling, a lot of plastic is piled up in
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 areas which needs to be stopped. A strict law can change the public attitude of haphazard dumping and encourage reuse of non-biodegradable materials. Citizens will abide by the rule only if they are punished or have to pay penalty. Considering
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, people will be concerned and reuse most of the wastage from their homes. They will try to dump lesser amount of trash as far as possible. In
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 way, people will be involved in the recycling process. For
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 if the government can bring out new motto “ More you throw, more you pay”,
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 obviously residents will try to throw less waste from their homes. In conclusion, it is high time for the government to consider stringent measures and execute laws to protect the environment.
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